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Walpurgis Night-The Retribution of Red (Book 8)

STORYBOARD/PLOT DRAFT
  • Found in a green house by the owner and taken in temporarily
  • Passed from one Wiseman to another before settling under the care of an Immortal group to wait for the return of the Ever-Being
  • Wallie discovered a picture of the Immortals with 2 of the members missing
  • One of the member secretly reveals that they are the wives of the two leading Immortals of their group who went missing during the Ancient War and presumed dead, leading to the downhill of their morale
  • Wallie and Serene receive recurring dreams of the missing members pleading for help
  • See this as a sign and convinced the group to search for them
  • Went to the place they were last seen and get pulled by a force
  • Finds themselves in a hot and humid dark red world and went through many obstacles, including getting roasted by the heat, attacked by a squid-like spider monster at sea, getting lost in the forest and having more intense dreams of the two members
  • Treks through a rocky road to find the first missing member who claims to be a fugitive of the Samakh followers
  • They are led to the hideout and into a trap, revealing that she actually converted to a follower as she blames the group for not rescuing her and leaving her to die, and that the other missing member is held in a contraption using her powers to send dreams to Wallie and Serene to lure them there
  • The first missing member killed the leader of the Samakh followers and assumed leadership, using Wallie and Serene's power to open the path to invade the entire Red continent and wage war
  • The leading Immortal have no choice but to kill his wife in the process
  • The other wife used all her strength combined with Wallie and Serene to close the pathway, turning her into crystallized form with slim chance of revival
  • Wallie and Serene again becomes the blame for all this as they are handed to the Ever-Beings to meet the Hymanjalai
  • Hymanjalai in phoenix form requests a higher price of gift for safe passage because of their knowledge of their destiny
  • Wallie and Serene offered one of their eye each to be replaced with the phoenix's eyes before passing through

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