Thursday, December 2, 2010

Walpurgis Night-The Impedence of Indigo (Book 3)


STORYBOARD/PLOT DRAFT
  • Wakes up in a sooty fireplace of a blacksmith and discovered by the son
  • Sees it as a good sign as they are approaching the Day of Leaving
  • Day of Leaving is where humans born with other worldly powers are sent to a special school to be trained as Ever-Beings
  • Those chosen are the blacksmith's son, a tailor's daughter, a cattle-breeder's son, a weapons-maker's daughter and a village idiot's son (who is actually very smart in contrast of his father)
  • Wallie and Serene follows them to the school and are asked to stay until the teachers can get in touch with an Ever-Being
  • Serene shows signs of affection to village idiot's son even though she knows he is the tailor's daughter's boyfriend
  • The novice Ever-Beings gets bored of lessons and want a quick way out
  • A mystery student hints on a game called 'ChildRaiser' that grants the winner any wish they desire
  • Follows instruction and plays the game, with many obstacles including the test of souls and inner demons which Wallie and Serene soon discovers
  • One by one as the game progresses, the players ended up missing
  • Wallie regains consciousness to find everyone entangled in a sticky web dead and mutilated while Serene stands below in a trance covered in blood
  • The game's main goal is to find the person with the worst inner demons and discovers Serene's pent-up bottled frustration because of her life raised by radically religious parents
  • Teachers come in the nick of time to rescue everyone before Serene can kill Wallie
  • Serene has to be confined in the Cleansing Chamber to rid her of her inner demons
  • Families come to collect their children's bodies and again blamed Wallie and Serene for the misfortune
  • After Serene's cured, taken to an Ever-Being to meet Hymanjalai at the Isle
  • Hymanjalai in half-husky-half-wolf dog form cannot allow Serene to pass because her soul is branded with spiritual chains of a murderer (the DEMONANGEL)
  • Wallie begs for Serene and Hymanjalai tears off Wallie's left arm whole, claiming that this is an equivalent price to pass through
  • Before passing through, Serene asks if she could call Wallie "Mother" and Wallie agrees

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